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Original: 7/5/2009 3:19 AM
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Sunday, July 05, 2009

glowing orange

 with the twain small velvet pouches in her hands, she tossed them out the window. and the birds didn't wait for even a moment, though they had been waiting for countless life times. while raising and unravelling their vast glowing orange and yellow pinions, they tucked the falling hands between cerise colored claws. ascending soundlessly upward.
in this world, or in this place, the trees stood tall. so tall they were that their tops bent a little with their touch against the steaming day sky--whose clouds were now leaking burning stars and slabs of stale, slumping orb.
yet the two birds flew, swaying the green canopies with their whopping wings until they became small coruscating orange specks.

her eyes then turned from what was left to be seen of the creatures. she observed the hole in her left rib cage. the chipped broken bones that stuck in her skin. her heart that was beating a little bit slower than before. and her two wrists, missing their hands. she was left with nothing but her eager irises to behold the end.

question:
its the end of the world. what do you have to offer to make the next evolution remember?
ps. i don't know what to put into the other pouch.
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i love your site.
You write beautifully.

if it was the end of the world, i would want them to know that - love really is all we need.
Posted 7/5/2009 4:02 AM by online now saaja Xanga True Member - reply

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thank you :)
and i agree with the whole love thing as well --which is why she gives them a piece of her heart
Posted 7/5/2009 9:33 PM by bleak_presence - reply

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